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So, is there anything else missing? I'm leaning against merging the [[List of Alchemy Stations]] with [[Crafting]], because the information is so specific to the machines. Of course, they are linked to each other. Clearly I hope. --[[User:Novaster|Novaster]] 02:46, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 
So, is there anything else missing? I'm leaning against merging the [[List of Alchemy Stations]] with [[Crafting]], because the information is so specific to the machines. Of course, they are linked to each other. Clearly I hope. --[[User:Novaster|Novaster]] 02:46, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
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:A lot of detail has been removed about recipes and materials. I guess it's okay. There's always a balance to be struck between "read other pages to learn about related topics" and "let's include the most important points here, so that readers don't have to bounce around".
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:I can't find anything else missing. Of course we can polish the text itself.
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:In the Economics section, the numbers of materials required for each star level are usually right, but there are a few exceptions, including [[Perfect Mask of Seerus]] and [[Swiftstrike Buckler]]. We need to hedge the wording a bit. [[User:Jdavis|Jdavis]] 14:17, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 14:17, 29 October 2015

Messy layout

I was wondering if someone could maybe add in some tables and spruce the crafting page up a bit with more pictures. --Cdst16 04:43, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

How's it look as of the 20:05, 27 October 2015 edit? I went for simplification and concise order of information. There were many weird links and a lot of content was repeated, so the article definitely needed some touching up. --Novaster 03:15, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
We seem to have lost a lot of content in the edits of this week. For example, there is no longer any discussion of whether heat level affects the quality of the upgrade. That may sound dumb, but it's a pretty frequent question on the forums. Why are special alchemy machines no longer mentioned? And so on. Jdavis 13:35, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Woops, didn't mean to take the heat information out. Appropriate alchemy machines are mentioned clearly in the Process section, and we're working on a list format. Check the edit history of List of Alchemy Stations for progress. Is there anything else missing? --Novaster 14:08, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Would anyone propose merging List of Alchemy Stations back into crafting? I can splice it back in after making the sortable table for it. --Novaster 15:14, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Not merging is fine with me. But there are three distinct processes, depending on whether the required alchemy machine is (A) ordinary type, (B) furniture type, or (C) other type. I think that we could explain that much more clearly. Jdavis 16:32, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
As we have discussed in the past, "Notes" sections are rarely valuable, because the stuff in them is no more "notes" than anything else on the page. The current Notes section consists of one paragraph on economics and two important paragraphs on upgrading.
I propose that we move the first paragraph into Economics. I propose that we split the Process section into From Scratch and Upgrading sections, and put all upgrading information in the Upgrading section. Jdavis 16:32, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Edit it how you think it would be most useful, then we will edit it again and again. The article needed updating, and the article has undergone massive changes in the past (it used to list materials...), so it seems to be a bit of a problem child. --Novaster 16:34, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Additionally, where have we discussed notes section in the past in this manner? The "Notes" section seems to be a standard on almost every wiki article in almost every wiki (though some call it "Trivia", which is bad, and I remember discussing that). Link would help a lot. --Novaster 16:35, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Furthermore, multiple sections lead to messy format. Instead of multiple tiny sections (as the page was before, hence the messy look), attempt to make them readable, as was done with the "process" section. --Novaster 16:39, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
I have made my edit --- all organization, no wording changes. I hope you agree that the sectioning is very clean. I will try to find you that link. Jdavis 17:15, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
I can't find a link, so maybe you are right that we have discussed Trivia sections but not Notes sections. Sorry. To clarify, I don't have a blanket objection to Notes. Small, non-crucial asides can go well in such a section. But I object to important, main-line information being thrown into Notes when there is somewhere better to put it. Jdavis 17:21, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
That does flow pretty nicely, but I'll have to adjust the captions I put below the images so they're not bulky and shove the table into the left-hand side of the page. I have a lot of references for notes/trivia sections on anime/gaming wikis, but the big mommy wikipedia seems to fuse the "notes section terminology" with references, which I find a bit odd, unless "notes" are considered "footnotes." It's pretty inconsistent between article families such as biology, history, and so on. Here's the thread where we discussed trivia and over-bulleting. --Novaster 17:26, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

So, is there anything else missing? I'm leaning against merging the List of Alchemy Stations with Crafting, because the information is so specific to the machines. Of course, they are linked to each other. Clearly I hope. --Novaster 02:46, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

A lot of detail has been removed about recipes and materials. I guess it's okay. There's always a balance to be struck between "read other pages to learn about related topics" and "let's include the most important points here, so that readers don't have to bounce around".
I can't find anything else missing. Of course we can polish the text itself.
In the Economics section, the numbers of materials required for each star level are usually right, but there are a few exceptions, including Perfect Mask of Seerus and Swiftstrike Buckler. We need to hedge the wording a bit. Jdavis 14:17, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Terminology

Back to spiral knights, do we know why the button says "transmute" instead of "craft?" There are plenty of terminology conflicts in the game (such as "crash pod," "escape pod," etc.) as well as in the release notes over time, but this discrepancy seems pretty major. Any forum threads from editors in the past on this? --Novaster 17:26, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Section Titles

I don't think "from scratch" is the best title, because the section describes general crafting. Why not "basics" or a more encompassing word? --Novaster 17:32, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

I guess my point is that the section should not describe general crafting. It should describe crafting where there is no precursor item.
Why? The precursor part of the crafting process is about as complicated as the rest of the crafting process altogether. So if we're trying to break this information into easily digestible chunks, it makes sense to split off the part involving a precursor item.
That said, the title "Basics" is fine with me. Jdavis 18:46, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
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